Goal: to write descriptively and hook the reader in. Goal 2: I am aware of how to write for an audience and support the main idea with detail and comment.
Dinosaurs!
I turned around and screamed a colossal Triceratop with three huge horns, it was behind all that time as I was picking berries! Its fiery hot breath was almost burning my head off, his red gem eyes was starring evilly it my terrified face. The dinosaurs body was covered was greenish scales, the thing I was mostly scared about was the triangular spikes down its spine all the way to the end of its very long tail, (it looked although it got stretched when it got caught in a tree.) Ha Ha Ha!
Mrs Hancock read us a little bit of The 13-Storey Treehouse, then she said to make our own 13-Storey Treehouse the class shouted "Yay!" It was our goal to draw a treehouse and make it not the exact same one in the story, so she told us if you couldn't have giant cookies and cream river then have it in your 13-Storey Treehouse!
Next it was time to design the treehouse and make it very detailed, so that's what we did. In my treehouse I have some of my favourite things, they are:
The Pet Care where you can clean and groom animals, but there are chicken, dogs, cats and rabbits because they are the only cages I did.
The second favourite floor is Candy place it has a Coco Spa and a Candy House, I just love candy!
2 more of them are my bedroom and the main room where we write story's and poems.
Me and my friend Emma helped with ideas. Her car is a lollie car it wine races and has to give me half the money she has from the race, if she lies and tell me that they didn't win the race the minion guards will take them to the Banana Jail! DUN DUN DUN!
My car is a Shoe/Candy car it is so fast, (but of course it doesn't beat Emma's car.)
The post mans car is a lime green bush. HaHaHa!
The mostly favourite thing is the Elephant Candy Machine, it flys around and shoots candy in your mouth whenever you're hungry out of its trunk. YumYum!
One more thing I forgot is the emergency things there is torches spare clothes and the emergency slide.
There a lots of other favourite floors but I don't have time do write lots more.
One spring morning Oliver woke up and peeked through the curtain. The sun beam was blinding him. As he was glimpsing to see if interesting things were happening, he just saw a cats fluffy black and white tail. So as soon as he saw the tail he pounced of the bed and bolted for the back door. To his surprise the door was open, so he ran to the tail on the lawn. When he saw the tail it ran into the bushes so he chased after it. a few steps into the bushes, he fell into a small pond with a little green frog croaking in his ear. The pond was connected to a creek! Eek! He was trying to climb out but his his hair was full of water. He was petrified. He kept scrambling up, one time he nearly got up but only just. Horray! Oliver got out, but Oh No! He was lost, DUN DUN DUN! His nose pricked up, he smelt a blueberry pie. He scampered after the smell. Despite the fact he didn't know where he going. Yay! He was home. now he could have peace and quiet at home, sleep in his own bed and eat his proper food.
My goal is to support the main idea with detail and comment.
My second goal is I am aware of how to write for an audience.
One beautiful sunny day walking through the park was a snow cloud white dog, followed by twelve yellow chicks. the first chick said ''Mummy are we at the cafe yet?''
" No my darling" said the dog.
On the way to the cafe they saw beautiful flowers.
The Haunted House
In the middle of the forest (well not exactly)
there was a haunted house. I wonder who lives there?
Lets go see. I knocked on the door the was no answer
so I slowly crept.
There were broken windows and cracked cups.
Soon I looked at the bedrooms, then I heard the door squeak
open and in came a very old and poor women.
If I get into trouble I don't know what will happen!
Maybe I will be a slave or maybe put under a spell.
I am aware of how to write for an audience and I support the main idea with detail and comment.
