This week my goals are to make a story plot and stick to it, also to detail my ideas. To stick to story plot I had to keep checking on what’s my ideas were to fit them all in my story, so I did a beginning, middle, end structure to fit in all of my ideas into one story. Then what I did was detail my ideas to make them even more interesting. My detailed ideas are in pink and blue means that I followed my story plot ideas.
Audience - years three to five
Purpose - to entertainment kids on a story that is filled with fairy tales
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A girl runs away from home. Because her parents are always stuck on their devices.
Finds herself facing some fairy tale characters that have started fading
Askes wrongs finds out that they are fading because nobody is reading fairytale stories. Nobody wants to come but in the end the three pigs and red riding hood come
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She meets more characters along the way, beauty and the beast, jack and his beanstalk and rapunzel in her tower.
Stop for picnic. Red riding hood takes everything out of her basket.
Comes across a dark castle and goes in she has to figure out 3 riddles. Riddles: 1. What one word starts with e and ends with e and only has one letter in it,what is the word ??? An envelope. 2. What is it, the more you take away the bigger it becomes??? A hole. 3. What loses its head in the morning but gets it back at night??? A pillow.
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The girl gets everyone to read fairytale stories again. Takes her own fairytale books and gives them to people to read. Then comes home to find her parents on the phone talking to the police saying the girls missing.
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Fading Fairy Tales
“Hey mum…. Mum!” I yelled… Nothing. “Mum, DAD!” I tried again, nothing. Man I was getting annoyed, they haven’t been off their phones all day! That night I stuffed a few things in my backpack and ran into the darkness.
The wolves howled and and the owls hooted as I stumbled over roots and twigs, then I heard whispers, thinking I imagined it I kept running “Hello there!” a voice said cheerily I skidded to a halt and stood there gaping at the voice, it was a short boy with millions of rats surrounding him. Protecting him. Their sharp teeth glowing in the moonlight, their red eyes bearing holes into me. “Who are you?” I asked cautiously “why I’m the Pied Piper” he replied with a huge grin on his face “and we’re the big bad wolf; the three pigs; and the three bears……” the big bad wolf said still listing names as he stepped out from behind a tree followed by the rest of them. “Wow!” I whisper then pinched myself. It hurt. “This isn’t a dream!” I exclaimed “yes but you must not tell anyone else” Said one of the pigs.
Seeing these fairytale creatures made me feel like I was 3 again, that’s when I realized that the Mad Hatter had no legs “hey what’s wrong with you?!” I ask “sorry I mean what’s happening to you?” The Mad Hatter looked down at where his legs should have been “it’s because no one is reading the fairy tale stories anymore” “well I could help if I could just go home and get everyone reading fairytale stories again” I reply “it’s not that easy once you see just one of us, you have to the witches castle to ask to return” answered Gretel. “Ok, fine, who’s coming with me?” I asked nobody spoke up with then finally after what seemed like ages little red riding hood stepped forward and said “come on guys someone’s gotta do it otherwise we’ll all disappear and nobody would hear from us again” “I guess if you put it that way we’ll do it” says one of the pigs stepping forward pulling his brothers with him.
So off we went through the woods as the sun began to rise, the warm glow of the golden sun filtered through the leaves making paths of sunlight. The sunlight radiated of the pigs faces making them look red. “Can we stop now!” Red riding hood whined “ve are going to turn into pork chops if we don’t stop” moaned one of the pigs “Ve know what you mean” said one of his brothers “if we don’t stop now and take a drink ve vill die” “I guess but not for long” I answered tired of their whining. “I bought some cookies; some drinks; some bread and cheese and some fruit” replies little red riding hood in a rush taking all the food out of her basket she carried.
By the time we had finished the sun was high in the sky we were back on track (I had to persuade red riding hood and the pigs not to eat all the food and save some). “So tell me how did this start happening?” I asked “huh, what are you talking about?” Red riding hood asked looking confused “you know the fairytale creatures fading” “oh” red riding hood looking down at her boots “that happened just a few years before you came along, it was so sad you see lots of us lost our family’s and best buds” she paused, a sad look came over her face “I lost my granny and mum, my besties Cinderella and Prince Charming and my pet, Mickey Mouse and his wife Minnie.” As red riding hood sobbed we kept walking. Passing Rapunzel, Beauty and the Beast’s castle, Jack and his beanstalk……we kept walking.
A while later ……
“Wow what is this place?” I ask stopping to stare at a dark castle looming over us.”We’re here, the witches castle” red riding hood answered. Shaking I walked to the humongous door and knocked. The door was flung open wide to reveal a long hall and at the end of the the hall was a throne made of thorns with a crow perched on the top. And sitting on that throne was the ugliest looking witch I had ever seen. (She also held a big wooden staff with a glowing sphere on top). “Hellooo” cackled the witch “Don’t just stand there come in.” Cautiously we walked down the hall trying hard not to look at the creepy things lining the hall like headless knights, skulls lining the shelves and a cauldron sitting to the side with a green fog rising from it.
“What brings you here?” She asked “um to get home again” I replied “you came from the land outside this forest?” “Yes, I ran away from home and saw one of you guys, I saw the Mad Hatter fading away and I asked fairy tales again” I answered in a rush “the only way to get home is answering 3 riddles” “okay” “riddle one, What one word starts with e and ends with e and only has one letter in it,what is the word ???” “Um” I thought, I looked at the others for help but they were in their own world. “Letters, umm not an envelope” “yess!” Cried the witch “you put letters in an envelope!” “Oh okay” “riddle number two, what is it the more you take away the bigger it becomes?” “Oh I know this one it’s a hole!” “great job now the hardest is always the last one…” the witch thought for awhile. A while later… “what loses its head in the morning but gets it back at night?” “Um” I said stumped “a headless knight, no that doesn’t make sense” I looked at the others. They weren’t in their own world anymore, they were trying to signal me, pillow, red riding hood mouthed “pillow” I said hoping it was the correct answer. “You are…” she paused “CORRECT!” With a wave of her staff a vortex of bats surrounded me. Next thing I knew I was back at home on my bed reading a story called Cinderella.
Then it all came flooding back to me. Mad Hatter disappearing, the witch… I jumped up remembering what my quest was. Grabbing a whole lot of fairytale stories off my bookshelf I sprinted out the front door and to the library (my parents didn’t notice). “Read fairytale stories!” I yelled “fairytale creatures are disappearing!” A few people stopped by and looked but kept walking and some actually took one my books to read! Yes it’s working! “Please spread the word, if we don’t read these a lot then our fairytale creatures we know so well will disappear.” I told a kid that had grabbed a book “Okay, sure.” That day I got at least 10 people to spread the word and all my books were gone.
“Ah excuse me do you have the time?” I asked a person walking past “um half past 7” yikes I missed dinner! I didn’t even want to go home my parents won’t even know I’m gone. I walked through the front door to her mum on the phone talking to the police. Hold on the police? “Mum!” I shouted “oh! Never mind she back” mum put down the phone and gave me a big hug “Frank she’s back!” Mum called, dad came running in “oh my gosh she’s here!” “Mum what’s going on?” I ask “you went missing!” Dad exclaimed “I thought you wouldn’t even notice me, you were so glued to your phones!” I said angrily “sorry, we’ll try” mum replied “thank you. Now this is the best happy ever after in the world!”
