Tess
She has brown eyes that twinkle like bright stars in the night sky.
Her hair matches her eyes.
She sounds friendly but sometimes sad, angry and grumpy. (sometimes cheeky too.)
I like it when I’m sad, she usually cheers me up, and when I've got no one to play with at home she would play with me. (plus my brother.)
Are you wondering who she is? Of course! Her name is Tess.
She is special because she makes me laugh, plays with me when I’m bored and she’s friendly. She always makes me smile.
I’m never happy without her.
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I support the main idea with detail and comment.
