Walking Through The Park

My goal is to support the main idea with detail and comment.

My second goal is I am aware of how to write for an audience. 

One beautiful sunny day walking through the park was a snow cloud white dog, followed by twelve yellow chicks. the first chick said ''Mummy are we at the cafe yet?''

" No my darling" said the dog.

On the way to the cafe they saw beautiful flowers.

The Haunted House

The Haunted House

In the middle of the forest (well not exactly)
there was a haunted house. I wonder who lives there?
Lets go see. I knocked on the door the was no answer
so I slowly crept.

There were broken windows and cracked cups.
Soon I looked at the bedrooms, then I heard the door squeak
open and in came a very old and poor women.
If I get into trouble I don't know what will happen!
Maybe I will be a slave or maybe put under a spell.


I am aware of how to write for an audience
and I support the main idea with detail and 
comment.

Wheres Tom?

Wheres Tom?

Wheres Tom? I don't know,
I think I know he might be on the moon
eating cheese with the moon monsters.

Or having a holiday for the rest of his life
in England seeing his family.

What about flying to outer space in his Thing-A-Ma-Jig
powered by baked beans.

Maybe he's in New York meeting Madagascar and
probably moved house.