Friday 13 June 2014

The Terrifying Bull

As I turned around I could see red fiery eyes looking at me. I could hear the bull scratching the dark brown dirt. The bull was as black as the midnight sky and I could see the big white colossal horns. I could smell cow pat on the ground. I could feel my heart pounding inside me it sounded like drums. I tasted the brown dust.
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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous16 June 2014 at 17:51

    I love that story because there was lots of adjectives.

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  2. Kim Waite1 July 2014 at 21:59

    Your wonderful writing created a really good picture for me in my head.
    Mrs Waite

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  3. Anonymous31 July 2014 at 12:12

    cool back round isabel .

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