Monday, 28 July 2014

Wind

We went out into the cold frosty wind. I felt the wind rushing and brushing my face and the frosty wet green grass freezing my feet. I can see branches swaying in the breeze and leaves dancing in the trees. I can taste my frozen tonge and cold wet spit. I can hear roaring leaves like the wavesand people shivering. I can smell the fresh fruit and rotting leaves. I feel the fresh frozen air.

1 comment:

  1. This is a really descriptive piece of writing Isabel . You have included plenty of WOW words to make it interesting. Please include your goal next time so I can see how you are going with it.
    Mrs H

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