Friday 1 August 2014

My Dad!

 One of the people who makes my heart feel happy is my wonderful dad. He makes my heart feel happy is because he hugs and kisses me and that is how my heart feel happy. My dad has green eyes and he has black hair like the midnight sky and his smile is like an upside down rainbow. When he smiles his eyes twinkle stars in the night sky. My dad is special because he reads story's to me, my sister and brother at night. When he says good night he kisses and hugs me good night.
His personality is very happy.













2 comments:

  1. Your Dad must love that.

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  2. Is there anywhere in this lovely descriptive writing where you could include an exclamation mark?

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