Monday, 25 May 2015

Walking Through The Park

My goal is to support the main idea with detail and comment.
My second goal is I am aware of how to write for an audience. 

One beautiful sunny day walking through the park was a snow cloud white dog, followed by twelve yellow chicks. the first chick said ''Mummy are we at the cafe yet?''
" No my darling" said the dog.
On the way to the cafe they saw beautiful flowers.


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