How A Lion Got Its Mane

How A Lion Got Its Mane...

Long ago in the wild there lived a lion with no mane. But there was a show in 2 days, he didn’t know what to do! So he went to the city not far away to a show place where there was a disco. He saw a few men with funny hairdos so he went to the back of the stage and found 10 orange wigs and he found a mirror that will come in handy. He put them on and looked in the mirror and said it looked so good, So when he went back to the wild (with the wigs on of course,) to show his friends and family what he did in the city, they were very amazed at what he did. So they all went to the disco and got some more wigs.

So that's how the lion got his mane.

Eep!

Goal: to write a beginning that sets the scene for the rest of the story.
Goal 2: I am aware of how to write for an audience and support the main idea with detail and comment.

Eep!

Once upon a time there lived two birds a boy and a girl, they lived on top of a hotel they had a chick named Birdy. He had wings but a human face, he also had bird feet. His mother is called Tina, she had blue like the glittering sea, her tweet is so sweet. The father is called Warren, he had chocolate eyes if he doesn't get enough sleep, he gets a little grouchy. 


One day Tina went shopping and got a Birdy some clothes. and Warren went to get some food from the corn field and the barn, which was a few miles away, he didn't really care. 15 minutes later Warren came back with a sack of food, corn, grain, bread, worms, seeds and those things that birds can eat.

Dragons

                     Dragons

Once upon a time there lived a queen, the queen's name was Holly. The five princesses were Isabel, Emma, Bry, Pascoe and Heidi. They lived in a massive castle, there were sixty servants to keep it clean and in tip top shape. The castle was in a deep green forest. outside the castle gates there was a marble courtyard.

One day the royal family set of for a walk (in the forest.) They knew the whole forest even where the wicked queen lived, her name was Mary The Evil. As they were strolling through the woods, they stumbled upon the Mary's evil castle. The royal family ran for their lives, but it was too late evil Mary had caught them! Mary's terrifying guards tied them up with ropes and strings. Holly, Isabel, Emma, Bry, Pascoe and Heidi twisted, turned and struggled to get out of the ropes and strings.

They were taken to a dungeon deep in the ground and were chained to the dungeon walls. Suddenly they heard a very loud ROAR coming from the other dungeon! They roar got louder the closer the dragon came, (they did not know it was a dragon.) The walls blasted down as six dragons came through. The royal family started to name and chose their dragon. Here's the dragon's name, color and who it belongs to

Holly's dragon is red and its name is 'Fire.'  Isabel's dragon is orange and its name is 'Flame.'  Emma's dragon is yellow and its name is 'Sunny.'  Bry's dragon is green and its name is 'Emerald.' Pascoe's dragon is blue and its name is 'Sky,'  and Heidi's dragon is purple and its name is 'Violet.'

The royal family flew back home, (after they had escaped) they decided that the dragons can live in a different castle a little further into the forest. For the rest of the week the dragons could be able to go out in the forest to get some things to put in their room in the castle (the dragon castle.) Two months later the royal family woke up bright and early on a sunny Monday to see if the dragons are okay. To their surprise the dragons have had babies!

A year passed... Two years passed, until one day Pascoe and Bry were going outside to have a walk. When as soon as they opened the door, they saw a female and male of every type of animals, with at least one baby of their kind beside them. So Holly said to the builders to make the same castle as the dragon's but on the other side (again a little further into the forest.) The animals were let every day of the week, but only for one week to get things for their room in the castle.

And they lived happily ever after, Except for the evil Mary who got locked up and chained to the dungeon walls of her castle, because of the guards. They did not like her bossing them around.


My goal is to support the main idea with detail and comment, and I am aware of how to write for an audience.

Dinosaur Attack!

Goal: to write descriptively and hook the reader in.
Goal 2: I am aware of how to write for an audience and support the main idea with detail and comment.

Dinosaurs!

I turned around and screamed a colossal Triceratop with three huge horns, it was behind all that time as I was picking berries! Its fiery hot breath was almost burning my head off, his red gem eyes was starring evilly it my terrified face. The dinosaurs body was covered was greenish scales, the thing I was mostly scared about was the triangular spikes down its spine all the way to the end of its very long tail, (it looked although it got stretched when it got caught in a tree.) Ha Ha Ha!

Youtube

Goal 1: to explain have YouTube channels and the rules around it.

Goal 2: to make a recording that is easy to watch and listen.

How To Use YouTube Properly

Room Four have been creating there

The rules are: do not put your favourite singers on or home videos, and be sensible.

Unlisted means that if you put it on your blog, people will be able to see it. If its privet people can't watch it, (if you put on your blog.)

What we use it for is when we have done some learning and Mrs Hancock says to make a video and put it on your own YouTube channels.

The 13-Storey Treehouse

Mrs Hancock read us a little bit of The 13-Storey Treehouse, then she said to make our own 13-Storey Treehouse the class shouted "Yay!" It was our goal to draw a treehouse and make it not the exact same one in the story, so she told us if you couldn't have giant cookies and cream river then have it in your 13-Storey Treehouse! 

Next it was time to design the treehouse and make it very detailed, so that's what we did. In my treehouse I have some of my favourite things, they are: 

The Pet Care where you can clean and groom animals, but there are chicken, dogs, cats and rabbits because they are the only cages I did.

The second favourite floor is Candy place it has a Coco Spa and a Candy House, I just love candy! 

2 more of them are my bedroom and the main room where we write story's and poems.

Me and my friend Emma helped with ideas. Her car is a lollie car it wine races and has to give me half the money she has from the race, if she lies and tell me that they didn't win the race the minion guards will take them to the Banana Jail! DUN DUN DUN! 

My car is a Shoe/Candy car it is so fast, (but of course it doesn't beat Emma's car.)

The post mans car is a lime green bush. HaHaHa!

The mostly favourite thing is the Elephant Candy Machine, it flys around and shoots candy in your mouth whenever you're hungry out of its trunk. YumYum!

One more thing I forgot is the emergency things there is torches spare clothes and the emergency slide.

There a lots of other favourite floors but I don't have time do write lots more.

And that's my 13-Storey Treehouse.

Oliver's Next Adventure

Oliver's Next Adventure

One spring morning Oliver woke up and peeked through the curtain. The sun beam was blinding him. As he was glimpsing to see if interesting things were happening, he just saw a cats fluffy black and white tail. So as soon as he saw the tail he pounced of the bed and bolted for the back door. To his surprise the door was open, so he ran to the tail on the lawn. When he saw the tail it ran into the bushes so he chased after it. a few steps into the bushes, he fell into a small pond with a little green frog croaking in his ear. The pond was connected to a creek! Eek! He was trying to climb out but his his hair was full of water. He was petrified. He kept scrambling up, one time he nearly got up but only just. Horray! Oliver got out, but Oh No! He was lost, DUN DUN DUN! His nose pricked up, he smelt a blueberry pie. He scampered after the smell. Despite the fact he didn't know where he going. Yay! He was home. now he could have peace and quiet at home, sleep in his own bed and eat his proper food.