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Goal: to write a beginning that sets the scene for the rest of the story.
Goal 2: I am aware of how to write for an audience and support the main idea with detail and comment.

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Once upon a time there lived two birds a boy and a girl, they lived on top of a hotel they had a chick named Birdy. He had wings but a human face, he also had bird feet. His mother is called Tina, she had blue like the glittering sea, her tweet is so sweet. The father is called Warren, he had chocolate eyes if he doesn't get enough sleep, he gets a little grouchy. 


One day Tina went shopping and got a Birdy some clothes. and Warren went to get some food from the corn field and the barn, which was a few miles away, he didn't really care. 15 minutes later Warren came back with a sack of food, corn, grain, bread, worms, seeds and those things that birds can eat.